What a disappointment!

I wanted to like this book so much. I had so many high expectations about it. I liked  to idea of the story and the blurb I read on goodreads about it just caught my attention. I love the cover of the novel but that's about it.I've tried to hard to like it, I read 100 pages and then I had to stop reading.The language is so bad and the way the story is put into words is awful.I feel like I am reading a paper written by an 11 years old student who is doing his/her best to write a story by using simple and direct sentences.